Death Progress Bar Chapter 118 Discussion

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My first impression of this story, based on the summary, was that it was a wuxia dog-blooded drama. IDK why... LMFAO! I also thought that the main focus of this story would be the brother-to-brother relationship between the MC and his bros. And I had no idea that there was a SYSTEM involved.... Basically, just from the summary alone, my first impression was a mess and altogether very very wrong *sneezing face*! BUT WELL, first impressions aside, I now know why this is so overwhelmingly popular in the review section~

CHARACTERS: 10/10

The characters are definitely the best part of this story! They're very realistic and no one is left behind in terms of character development. I always felt that the characters in this story were authentic, which made it easier to empathize with them!

Shi Jin (MC) :

The MC this time is a transmigrator who died and ended up playing the role of the favored son of a scum-man with five other children (all of whom he ignored in favor of the original!MC). In the original novel, the OG!MC's brothers were out to get him, and so, taking drastic measures, Shi Jin does everything he can to get himself out of that situation!

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    In terms of personality, Shi Jin actually reminds me of anime shounen protagonists! But, not in a bad way? He has strong ideals and a strong mentality. He's not necessarily the strongest or the smartest, but with his Golden Finger (the SYSTEM) and a strong backer (the ML) he barrels through all opposition.

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Lian Jun (ML) :

The ML is the boss of an underground association called "Annihilation". The MC meets him after running away from his bros, and to him, who has been mired in the dark underground society all this time, the MC's bright personality and kindness are like the sun!

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    The ML is the strong and reliable type. He appears cold at first glance but he's actually very gentle. He cares about his men, and even after being betrayed several times (one even causing him to be unable to walk) he still wants to get them out of their current 'dark' world.

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Important Side Characters:

I usually only mention the main CP when I do these reviews but AHH I can't NOT mention the Guas and the MC's bros! I'll spare you the details, especially on the bros, because that's bordering on spoiler territory, but they're definitely notable!

ROMANCE: 9/10

Ah~ What sweet romance~ Furthermore, it's a rare versatile couple! With the wild but also innocent MC and the beautiful but powerful ML. They make a great couple with lots of fun contradictions in their personalities. The romance is slow, and trouble-free, for the most part! The only reason I didn't give it a perfect score was because the development of the romance was consistently stalled by the MC's obliviousness -- which was fun, in its own way! But, also rather simple?

SETTING: 9/10

The author put in the effort to settle the background for this fic! It's the kind where the past matters in the present. And they did a great job weaving things in~ The underworld setting also made for a couple of fun arcs.

PLOT: 9/10

The initial premise of the story and the driving force in the plot is the enmity between the MC and his five brothers. The MC wakes up with a "Death System" in his head and two death progress bars. One of the progress bars is his own, which was practically full already when he had arrived in this new world. Of course, his task was to reduce it, which is easier said than done. There's also a secondary bar that belongs to the ML -- which he also had to lower down.

These bars help a lot when it comes to fixing the novel plot as well as the ML's own issues (which weren't mentioned in the original novel).

RATING: 4.75/5

Overall, this is a fave for me! It's practically close to perfect in my eyes for the great characters alone! The only reason I stopped reading was that I knew that the translation wasn't done. So, I picked a good stopping point based on the available TL-ed chapters LOLOL. In the future, I'll definitely come back to reread this! I'm eager to find out how the relationships between the MC and his bros will work out in the end~

RANDOM THOUGHTS:

  • Personal Enjoyment: This is occasionally very tense and very angsty. However, after the relationship is established, there's plenty of sweetness to go with the angst between the bros. So, overall, personal enjoyment is 4/5! It hurts sometimes, but the hurt is good for you!
  • Literary Level: The plot is a little bit messy? I mean, there are several levels to pay attention to. At times, I wanted the author to focus only on the family/relationship aspects, and not necessarily on the underworld plot (which is action-heavy and rather superfluous to the development of the main characters at the end). So, I'd say 4/5.
  • Angst Level: As mentioned, things get pretty heavy! The ML is not in a good state in the beginning and the MC is not all that better with his death hanging over his head. There's also the heavy drama between bros in the latter arcs... Altogether, this is a pretty angsty story! Around 4/5! So, prepared the tissues!
 
  • #5
I actually started reading this book on another platform...but when they took is off I had to find it here...thats how good I thought it was...i was willing to download another app on my phone just to read it..
 
  • #6
So excited for this first meet
 
  • #8
i love this novel! thank you for writing this, Author! more chapters please! ^_^
 
  • #9
The author took her time with each character’s POV. You won’t be disappointed. I cannot wait for more in this series!
 
  • #10
Love following the story from the first book can’t wait for the next
 
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