Death Progress Bar Chapter 8 Discussion

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  • #1
So far, this is a very interesting alternate universe/survival/suspense/action/mystery series. The MC watches the progress in the death bars to watch for signs of impending death and uses this information to warm him that something dangerous is about to occur. Even though I'm only eight chapters in, there are plenty of two-faced characters to keep my attention and raise the suspense. I like the hard-working MC, and all of the other characters have their own depth as well. I'm looking forward to how the plot plays out.
 
  • #2
Love this book the second in the series. Great work author awesome read will be looking for more from you. Keep up the outstanding work!!!
 
  • #3
Your story is very interesting and I love it.  I can't wait for the next story from you to come out.   keep up the great work!!
 
  • #4
Love this so far! Need another update!
 
  • #5
This was a great read! I LOVE Eric! Brooke was really annoying at times, & Tate pissed me off often.  My biggest issue was most sexual scenes were not even between them. I don't much love reading abt sex with MC & others vs the 2 MCs together. I'd recommend this book overall.
 
  • #6
Loving this book so far! Can’t wait to see where the story goes, love the character dynamics!
 
  • #7
The story is starting off really good.  reminds me of some others stories I read on here.   You are over doing it on the Descriptions of everything the characters are doing.  very repetitive.  There is A part of the story that made no sense whats so ever.  you had the kids who are very smart drink
 
  • #9
please finish the book.stop updating everyday with 1 chapter only.we read book to relax not to be disappointed.
 
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