THE LUCIFER

Well Writing a review for your own book is not a good idea so they say? But whatever, so I’ll just say a few things. Also, if you have any questions about the novel, you can leave them in the comments! I truly don’t mind answering.“First of all, what is this book about?”It’s about a young hunter named Sakamoto, who unknowingly carries the legacy of the First Men—a forgotten lineage of the strongest warriors to ever exist. As the world is thrown into chaos by a secret war between powerful factions, Sakamoto must uncover the truth about his origins, harness the terrifying force within him, and survive against those who seek to control or destroy him.“What type of guy is Sakamoto?”Familiar name lol i know but,He’s a reluctant warrior burdened by fate. Once an ordinary young man, he’s thrown into a world of monsters, hunters, and gods, where he has no choice but to adapt. He’s loyal, determined, and dangerously unpredictable—especially with the forbidden entity  inside him.“God-like Strength?”Not exactly. Sakamoto is strong, but his power comes at a price. Every ability he gains brings him closer to losing himself. He has to struggle, train, and master his own limits—because in this world, even the strongest can fall. Romance?”Not exactly, I’m sorry but if I have a change of mind there will be but it will be a slow burn. With the weight of destiny on his shoulders, Sakamoto doesn’t have time for love… but sometimes, emotions can’t be ignored.Chapter updating?Right now, I’m focused on crafting each chapter carefully. Updates will be consistent as the story unfolds, and major arcs will be planned ahead to keep the pacing strong, But that depends on a lot of things though.And, finally…Why do u review this book? Some would wonder if this book will be worth it and my answer for you is Yes, As an Author I always learn and adapt that’s one thing I want you to know. So I know And  think this book is going to be  good. I believe in my story. If you love a mix of intense battles, deep lore, and strong character development,plots, then The First Men Chronicles is something you won’t want to miss!I won’t say too much. Join the train and trust the process.

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what a shitty novel this is..the plot hole are so wide.its more shitty than a typical Chinese urban novel

Drake is extremely relatable to how I would react in such a situation (which may or may not be terrible) but his off-hand comments and sayings really got a few good laughs out of me.I have not read all the way, but I found myself already glued reading past my expected appointment time, to the point where I had to keep reading even while I was meeting others.All the usual tropes is there, and it worked without a hitch. Great progression, great character. I love the singular focus on Drake along with sparse chapters on other viewpoints. Not too pushy, but enough to keep the reader aware of the other players around Drake as well.Style:The humour and flow of the story is great, it really makes for a simple nice easy read. So far nothing that really throws off the pacing of the story ( except the namesake of the novel, hint hint)The way he describes the battle is great as well, just enough details for the readers to visualize and feel like they were Drake, fighting off the same monsters.Story:I've read up to Chapter 27. But so far it's been pretty great, with all the interesting interactions between Drake and people he meet along the way that I felt the need to review this so others can see it.The item descriptions are also hilarious. I always love 'Systems' that flame the owner or user. The way he scuffles with the skills and item drops that he gets is extremely interesting and gets a good laugh out of me all the time.Grammar:No major flaws, and no minor problems either. Nothing broke the flow at which I read, and that's a big plus!Character:Oh Drake you silly boy. I love all his wild-card like antics, and the light-hearted view that he adopts when going through the world.But when it comes down to the nitty gritty, Drake really does deliver the hardwork and focus on goals to overcome or surpass others. Something worthy of admiring in a main character, and it makes the reader want to support him from their hearts.Overall, a great read. I think I'm going to end the review here and keep reading, because it's that fluid of a read. Great job!

The story itself is quite solid across the board. Decent prose and writing ability from the author, and generally just a solid read all around.

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