The Bastard's Redemption

WHY WAS THIS PICKED.There was another Nivel that was good that some people even likes it more then Astral Apostel. Why was that Novel for example picked. It had  over 4 Stars in the Rating

So far I would say this novel has a lot of potential and is very good. I like a lot of things that the author is doing. For example the direction of the story. I also like the setting. Two bad thing I will say is that I hope for more character development for the mc. It seems he randomly just got a new trait that just didn't make sense but that could be explained in flashback if you want to do that. I am referencing about when he was saying he had no qualms about killing someone but added a justification about how he had a lot of negative karma which kind of contradicts itself. One last thing I don't like is the main characters reasoning on why he wants to ascended to higher realms. We are informed that his parents are dead and that later they may actually be alive. I have a problem with how the mc reasoning for what happened here. For example he is five years old at this time so I would expect him to be more immature in his thought process like it had been shown so far. When it was revealed his parents might be alive he kind of just shrugged it off and thought that he will go to meet them in the future. I would expect maybe some doubts instead of this. Like maybe he would think, did they abandon me or didn't want me. Maybe I am stretching a bit. Otherwise I think the novel is very good and I am enjoying it a lot. Hope for me chapters in the future. Also don't take the negatives I have said to heart I have been thinking authors would appreciate it more if I write more negatives about their novel so they could improve.

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I don't know how to write reviews. So I'll just write what I think. This is a good book. It's worth your time to read. I look forward to the next chapters.

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i personally don't like it but that doesn't mean you shouldn't try it, I feel like everything felt a little too generic and it's really not just one thing, a lot of the decisions (pointed out in the paragraph comments by a few people) are just super generic and cliche, also the Ki/Mana in the world the author has made is called Ora and it just doesn't slide off the tongue well which was kinda awkward for me aswell. but it's pretty good you should check it out if you have spare timeps. I only got 10 or so chapters in and supposedly it gets better later so yeah you should probably read a bit longer than i did

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