honestly it's pretty terrible because the story background changes to much. for example in the 1 or 2 chapter the mc had parents but then in the next chapter the mc parent had died and suddenly had a sister. also I feel like it drags out a scene to long. but other than that it's a good concept just needs to go back to the drawing board .
After reading 79 chapters, I found the story mostly annoying and frustrating before I had to just put it down. Do you like a main character that leaves loot on the ground and refuses to look out for himself because he expects the author to hand him what he needs when he needs it? Do you like a main character who refuses to bathe or wear anything but blood covered rags because he prefers to look and smell like swine? do you like main characters that get good weapons handed to them but refuse to use them and just punch everything? Do you like a main character that shows all his enemies his secrets, but will irrationally keep secrets only when it hurts his own opportunities just because. Do you like an MC whose "cultivation" is only described as visualizing a demon head? Not a joke. That's it. I don't. I feel personally insulted. Er Gen has put in minimal effort on this one. I think maybe Er Gen fed an AI a bunch of cultivation novels, and this is the novel it vomited out.
If you want to know something about this story, just ask and I'll try to answer your questions. And of course I have given myself 5 stars because why not.
I am not liking it. one the MC acts like he can survive anything when caught by law enforcers and blatantly tries to help them after thier mistreatment. I don't want him to oppose them but keeping his distance would be logical in such a situation. second he could have said he was the one who created the chip which would let him off the hook but he didn't even though he knew that Qin guy would have reported his name already.
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