As of chapter 52: (haven't read the chapters after)I really like the story so far. The pros are that there is character development. Spoiler:I like his relationship with his sister and i think that the split personality makes sense as it is not east for a person to change drastically however, i feel that its introduction is quite abrupt. Like there was no transition. It was just *pop* and there it is. Otherwise it's great and i like his ruthlessness
I love it already, to many it may be confusing in the beginning just as the author states, but just keep reading, things begin to get explain and pop out to you in understanding, this novel is very eye catching to a reader like me and i hope the author keeps up the good work till the very end!!!
I'm gonna be true about this review.First the writing quality: 3It was well performed how you described the setting and characters. However, the way you write verb scenes, such as battle scenes, is awful. Additionally, your paragraph structure was unclear.Example:The beast lunged in his front with its club swing. Victor ducked down under it and dashed forward faster than the eye could see. He tore off both of its legs with a single slash. The ogre fell face forward.,The paragraph itself is fine, but the construction is awful. Additionally, if you consistently use a word like lunged, a new reader will find it unclear (which is you can just use the word hopped, leaped, or jumped)Updating stability: 5 updates a dayStory development: 4 its good for nowCharacter design: 4 since the paragraph structure was bad Worldbuilding: 5. too early to say so just support
Listening from the side at their discussion, Wang Tao couldn't help but sigh. Great, from a normal student with a normal life, he ended up hanging out with slave traders. What a twist of life!
After a few seconds passed without any sort of pain being felt, I slowly opened my eyes. Where the lion was once sitting proudly was now empty, the lion seemed to disappear. Looking around in confusion, I managed to spot the lion falling down the mountain and eventually spread its wings and begin gliding.
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