This story is one of the best I have read so far… hopefully you will get better soon and continue updating. Don’t let haters get you… it’s your story and you determine how it should be told. We are here to enjoy the journey
Lados was experiencing nature's gifts of Autumn through his senses. He gazed along the harvested fields, run through by the oily river, far away to the mountainsides. There, trees were shedding their leaves performing their spectacular ritual. Lazy trees wore light green and golden yellow foliage, while hasty ones were in a hurry to put on their orange and crimson. He felt like he flew over the low altitude forests, admiring their color grading, before returning over the river's course. His feet, light as ever, touched the ground. He walked the plains carefree. Now and then, his ears picked up distant animal noises. The bustling earth dwellers were preparing for winter. Mothers called out to their young to gather around their hole, inside their nest. Birds would store seeds, leaves, fruit cores for the winter.
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