this novel is the best I have Been waiting for centuries for this type of system and I found another copying this novel I think it's called overlord of all systems. be aware!
You are so poor in story writing.. You keep on repeating one fact over and over again.. In a chapter only 2 - 3 character dialog.. I hate what u are doing to the character plot. Pls be creative.. I score you 1/10
I read a few chapters but just couldn't get into it. The author keeps pointing out that he's wearing open crotch pants so his penis is revealed. Thought it'd get better but it didn't. Plus, flipping his penis when he's a baby? Yeah, I wish I could forget about that but I can't. I forgot which novel it was, but there was one where a dad told his son (the main character) that he used to play with his penis as a baby. Sorry, but that turns me away from a story.
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