By 650 chapter mega good novel. But n the sensual and stupid transformation of MC's personality the novel totally disgusted me. Till 650 chapters it was one of my favorite novels.
I am the type of reader that only reads the first chapter or so then calls quits so my reviews may be a bit lazy but you got me to reach the second chapter just by mc's comedy so I approve. I know writing and stuff takes extensive planning and it can be a tiring chore really. For me I like stuff straight to the point so if I were to write a novel it would have story and world building but maybe missing bits of process of explanation in logic. All I see in first chapters is that authors do like 33 paragraphs but a lot of them are just written in 2 lines with good spacing. I am digressing... Anyway you could make it big as an author you are able to overcome your hurdle of consistency!
I held off reviewing until now, because I wanted to wait and give my honest opinion of this novel, and now I can finally say it's peak. Why's it peak? because the author writes with passion. The story doesn't feel soulless. If you like "Red Rising" you'll mostly enjoy this. The MC is not a generic, copy and paste character. He has personality. The dynamic he has between other characters are well written. The grammar is good, though I'm sure there's room for improvement, I'm too dumb to notice.The power system is great, from what I've seen so far. It's actually quite unique, I haven't seen anything like it. The Mc's power seems like it's going to be alot of fun to see how he uses it.overall I came expecting silver and struck gold instead, I really hope the author continues this story!
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